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| ohxrosie 2008-11-25 ch 26,   | This was a fantastic story, one of the best I've read on here. (Favorite!) |
| akinmtyua 2008-11-24 ch 26, | WAH HOO! I really liked the ending! Good job. I wish the rainy-van scene lasted longer, but I think the way it is works just right. Congrats and such. |
| kosocielo 2008-11-23 ch 26, | Great story. Are you planning a sequel. Was rainy pregnant? Please answer. |
| Pione 2008-11-23 ch 26, | "Lead the way" I am in love with your last line. :) Love the concept of your story! I can't wait to read more of your works. |
| Written 2008-11-22 ch 1, | I hate to fave a story without reviewing, but I havent read enough to say much yet! It's good, certainly. interesting idea for a sci fi fic. I'm just like, dead tired, so nothing I'm saying is making much sense haha. its 2 am! I'll be back with more reviews that actually make sense later. |
| D-Mish 2008-11-22 ch 26, | This was acutally pretty good. I love the relationship between Van and Rainy - its perfect and how you wrote about it is perfect too. I love the ending! |
| WhiteChristmas 2008-11-22 ch 1, | The ending is better now! It feels more pulled together. Thanks for reading my critique! =) |
| dramaqueen89 2008-11-22 ch 26, | no epilogue or something? it feels lacking :| i love van though :D |
| belle.nisce 2008-11-20 ch 26, | Oh my god oh my god oh my god! Perfect ending. One of my favorite stories on fictionpress ~ you did Rainy and LUCC proud :). I'm assuming that since this is the end that her bill passed and now life is pretty much back to how we know it in real life. Hoorah, hoorah. Looking forward to the next story of yours! PS - Is there a real-life Ashley parallel? Because I think I want to marry him. |
| Kyrina 2008-11-20 ch 26, | is that the end? like seriously? wow, this absolutely fan-**-tastic. your great, and dont let anyone say otherwise coz i bet that they are just jealous...wow... =D |
| DuchessYappingDog 2008-11-19 ch 26, | AGH! I can't believe it's the end. The wedding ceremony--CLASSIC. God. It was brilliant. Especially when they flick off everyone simultaneously... agh! My favorite scene, by far! |
| Lady-Word 2008-11-19 ch 2, | luved the terrorist joke. i think this is really asume so far- I can't wait to finish it! |
| Serena 2008-11-19 ch 26, | Wait so this is finished? There's no finish with Van and Rainy? No legal resolve? |
| Sarahj259 2008-11-19 ch 26, | thats it? is there going to be a prologue? please say yes... Great STorynes...Good job!! |
| breathless74 2008-11-19 ch 26, | i love this! this was probably the best chapter. it would make a really fun movie ;) |