Your Author's Note threw me. I was not confused, so I would like to think that I got it. BUT then again maybe I both missed whatever details you mentioned AND the reason to be confused. I can be that oblivious at times. Plus I read the 4 chapters in short bits and pieces over the course of the evening so it might have got jumbled up in my mind...hum. Now I'm curious.
Interesting work though. I agree that this is different from your old stuff. Definitely more dark. But also more mature and has a better hold on setting and description and making the plot fit together. Good job.

You know Insomiak? Cool =D
I'm glad to see youre alive and kicking.
Im a bit short of time so I havn't had the time to read this story carefully yet but I will. It looks promising.
And sorry but I just have to ask, is there ANY chance for a continuation of Toxic Butterfly??
I am going to die (im serious) if I cant know what will happen with Emory and Sianyde)...

At any rate, I love your writing style!
Ja na!

Interesting story, hope you update soon! :]

nyah love ^-^ *squishes Noel*

I was sitting here after reading and wondering what I would say in my review.
Needless to say, I still don't know.
This story does have a dark under current, something that I'm not sure that I like or not, which draws me in all the more. Something tells me its not gonna have a satisfactory ending where everything is bright and sunny and Damien and Noel are gonna have little tots running about.
I love how you can see that Noel is slowing throwing caution to the wind. Though I have to say, not locking your door IS pretty much asking for hot, steamy sexapades with your current obssession.

Anywho, keep up the good work. I'd like to see where this leads, even if it is hopelessly depressing. xD T_T

Hmm I can't believe you haven't updated this story in awhile.
It's very good, I like how you describe things as your telling
the story. I can't wait to read more chapters.

I felt the strange urge to 'Wo' at the end of this chapter. It was strange. But anyhow. Good story.

Wonderful story! I'm very curious about Damien's character. Er, in terms of age, is he around the same age as Noel? Just curious because you refer to him as a boy?

I'm really enjoying this one. Some parts so far interestingly enough reminded me of this french film "Amelie". Very good movie, I recommend if you haven't seen it. I think I understand the reasons of what occured in this chapter, no worries from me. Plus I loved it! Very cool.

Hey,

I like your story so far, but I have to ask; Have you seen the movie 'Le fabuleux destin d'Amélie Poulain'? Your way of introducing characters, their quirky little habits, the setting of the café, Noels liking for photography, the lost photo-album, the way Noel and Damien exchange kisses... It all seems very familiar to me.
Not that I mind if your story IS inspired by Amélie, though. I'd like to see what you do with it. :D

I have to say that I love the imagery! It all looks so beautiful when I picture it in my head! Especially the origami stars and scrapbook!

Can't wait till u update!

Wow, love this story, just like I loved Klutz Toxic Butterfly. I don't really think it would be too huge a change for you to keep going with that, although with this story it seems a lot less light-hearted. Anyway, I guess I should stop rambling and let you update (soon please?). By the way, thank you for using the letter U(that reminds me so much of Seseame Street), I hate it how some people leave it out.

So pretty! I love how your writing flows so smoothly and the way the words just work with each other.

Looking forward to more.

Silania

That author's note got me all scared that I've missed something O_O I DON'T LIKE BEING SUDDENLY AWARE OF MY OWN STUPIDITY! lol but I loved the chapter ^^ it was HAWT hehe ^_^ I propose more smut lol but I guess there needs to be a plot there too so really, just more :D

"some things are just better left to interpretation"

I have to say that I agree with you very much so. I'm enjoying this story so far as well. I'm not exactaly sure as to why I like it, it's just... refreshing I suppose. Something new and not cliche. But I can't wait to see what you are going to do with this . I'll be here when you update the next chapter~