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| Creative Jenius 2008-07-20 ch 1,   | Wow. This piece makes my mind instantly shift to two other books, instantly: 1. Green Darkness, by Anya Seton 2. Lolita, by Vladimir Nabokov Because from the impression that I get, the narrator is perhpas a religious authority figure and he has feelings for someone young and teasing, whom he should never have but wants very badly. I'm not even sure that's what you were aiming for, but that's what I feel. |
| the naked civil servant 2008-01-27 ch 1, | i had to just review again reiterating how in love i am with this poem. truly. madly. deeply. hysterically. it is beyond genius. |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2007-05-04 ch 1, | Oh, I love this. The whole italicized section was absolutely perfect. It gave me shivers. |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-14 ch 1, | This is different and amazing i think i might have to have it as a favourite |
| wind up car in motion 2007-04-04 ch 1, | yes, this is gorgeous. i honestly can imagine it being read to students in the classroom, then people murmuring and debating and wondering at the meaning years and years from now. i love it. |
| JULIET 2007-04-04 ch 1, | I LOVE YOU YOU ARE A GODDESS AND A HIGH PRIESTESS I MISS YOU SO MUCH AND YOU HAVE A MUCH MORE EXTENSIVE VOCABULARY THAN ME :p |
| Aslan Israel 2007-04-04 ch 1, | This left me breathless in every way. You have the most wonderful diction; you place the words perfectly. Brava. |
| Tytherpol 2007-04-04 ch 1, | This is different, but really good. I like it an awful lot. |
| TrunkZy 2007-04-04 ch 1, | "Next monsoon season, I am determined to have you: backed up in the red tape of a complaint" Love. Absolute love reminds me of fortresses and knights and rain. For some reason. |