Reviews for The Old Woman And The Devil

Planeswalker 2007-04-04 ch 1,	abuseThis was excellent, and I really enjoyed it :)
Nirnaeth Arnoediad 2007-04-04 ch 1,	abuseThis was quite a nice story; I really like the Grimm feel to it. The only suggestion with reference to your actual writing is that some of the sentences felt a little clipped and choppy, but that tends to be a Grimm thing as well, so if it's the effect you were going for, just ignore me. One thing, though, poultry is generally better paired with white wine, not red. :P