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Reviews For: The Perks of Being a Nobody

Unique Child
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abuseAh good. I like it so far. Update soon and it will get better.
me
2007-04-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like the beginning very much, kind of cliched, but its good. Cliches are good, and kind of unavoidable in romance. I like your characters, but I think, if you want my advice, that as your story progresses, you need to show the flaws more. I know that kind of thing would be hard to do in a first chapter, but its just a heads up, becasue I found most people reading stories dont like it when the people dont have apparent flaws to them, because it makes the reader less able to compare with the character. But really great job, and i'm looking forward to reading more!
acriter
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abuseit's really good... I like it, got a bit confused with the switching point of view but that normally happens anyway. Anyways keep going!
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