You're either a very tortured soul/genius, or very empathetic!
Great job.

Kali

This was wonderful. I just thought that you might also want to know, that in your summary you put slavation, instead of salvation.

Beautifully written once again. I am going to add this to my C2 and my favorites.

Best Wishes!

(TSP)

That is really sad but it is really well-written. I really liked it. I hope things get better for you. I hope you find the salvation that you are looking. Keep writing. Venting through poetry always helps, ya know. Good work, though.