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Reviews For: Razorblades and Blood Parades

Leaving Here
2007-06-10
ch 1,
ah.
i love it.
the last line, did it for me.
its soo much like my line of thinking.
wat goes on in my head.
haha.
this is great.
keep writing, liz.
Venus Immortelle
2007-04-04
ch 1,
hm I loved it. I think i was on the edge of my seat with that one. i look forward to reading more from you ^_^
smile for the sunshine
2007-04-04
ch 1,
Wow; powerful but sad. Like really sad. I like it but wow. Yeah, I've written a poem about loneliness called, "A lonely soul" and it briefly touches upon a person's struggle with cutting but not that in depth. I hope things get better for you. Keep writing. Venting sometimes helps.
Nvmbr17th
2007-04-04
ch 1,
What the **? This put me in the mind of somebody having violent sex -though I know that isn't what was going on- and I have to say, that's quite kinky. It must be your style. I like how you said "you don't know how desperate I am" because a lot of the poems on here are trying to justify the author's right to patheticness. Kudos.
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