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| Leaving Here 2007-06-10 ch 1, | ah. i love it. the last line, did it for me. its soo much like my line of thinking. wat goes on in my head. haha. this is great. keep writing, liz. |
| Venus Immortelle 2007-04-04 ch 1, | hm I loved it. I think i was on the edge of my seat with that one. i look forward to reading more from you ^_^ |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-04-04 ch 1, | Wow; powerful but sad. Like really sad. I like it but wow. Yeah, I've written a poem about loneliness called, "A lonely soul" and it briefly touches upon a person's struggle with cutting but not that in depth. I hope things get better for you. Keep writing. Venting sometimes helps. |
| Nvmbr17th 2007-04-04 ch 1, | What the **? This put me in the mind of somebody having violent sex -though I know that isn't what was going on- and I have to say, that's quite kinky. It must be your style. I like how you said "you don't know how desperate I am" because a lot of the poems on here are trying to justify the author's right to patheticness. Kudos. |