That was AMAZING! I really like it ( duh ), and hope you'll update very very soon.

Good luck,
SWP

This is really good! Just watch grammar a bit. Good, interesting, funny story line though!

Uh-oh! Poor Blythe. And poor Julian too, so cynical.

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= ] i like this story. Blythe seems to be almost .. hypocritical sometimes. she seems to be highly judgemental of others who do not deserve it. the twins, while frivolous and .. girly, don't deserve the feelings of dislike that Blythe projects towards them. atleast, that's the way i feel. but maybe there is more to it than what i perceive? but somehow it does not make me like her any less. please update soon.

Peter is Blythe's brother, right? She got caught!! Can't wait.

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This story has a nice start. Keep going, and I can't wait to see what it will become. Love the title. I'd work on longer chapters.

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The Albino deigns to give us a name. So Julian does agree to Blythe's help, right?

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I enjoyed this, please update soon!

poor girl...

Interesting. I LOVE Blythe. Wondering about the Albino, at first I thought he was a vampire, but I guess not.

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well, i do agree that this is very good. But, it is still quite noticable that the writer is American. a simple change of wording would get that sorted though. eg: instead of saying "the Wilkinsons gave this party every year..." say: "the Wilkinsons had this party every year.

"knickers in a bunch" to "Knickers in a knot"
"repair" to "mend"

and so on.

I really like this, please upsate soon!

So far so good, I'm going to keep reading.

I love this story already! I hope you update frequently.

Haha, Blythe's father reached for a Derringer instead of a gun. Witty.