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| Edalene Athene 2008-07-30 ch 1,   | This is really good! Just watch grammar a bit. Good, interesting, funny story line though! |
| ihrtbks 2007-08-08 ch 6, | Uh-oh! Poor Blythe. And poor Julian too, so cynical. UPDATE SOON! |
| Inkless 2007-08-07 ch 6, | = ] i like this story. Blythe seems to be almost .. hypocritical sometimes. she seems to be highly judgemental of others who do not deserve it. the twins, while frivolous and .. girly, don't deserve the feelings of dislike that Blythe projects towards them. atleast, that's the way i feel. but maybe there is more to it than what i perceive? but somehow it does not make me like her any less. please update soon. |
| ihrtbks 2007-06-29 ch 5, | Peter is Blythe's brother, right? She got caught!! Can't wait. UPDATE SOON! |
| Grace Panna 2007-06-18 ch 4, | This story has a nice start. Keep going, and I can't wait to see what it will become. Love the title. I'd work on longer chapters. Update soon! |
| ihrtbks 2007-06-17 ch 4, | The Albino deigns to give us a name. So Julian does agree to Blythe's help, right? UPDATE SOON! |
| Raven of Ice 2007-06-17 ch 4, | I enjoyed this, please update soon! |
| flojo22811 2007-06-16 ch 3, | poor girl... |
| ihrtbks 2007-06-15 ch 3, | Interesting. I LOVE Blythe. Wondering about the Albino, at first I thought he was a vampire, but I guess not. UPDATE SOON! |
| Aisling67 2007-05-20 ch 1, | well, i do agree that this is very good. But, it is still quite noticable that the writer is American. a simple change of wording would get that sorted though. eg: instead of saying "the Wilkinsons gave this party every year..." say: "the Wilkinsons had this party every year. "knickers in a bunch" to "Knickers in a knot" "repair" to "mend" and so on. |
| Raven of Ice 2007-04-16 ch 2, | I really like this, please upsate soon! |
| Nolaknowsmyname 2007-04-16 ch 1, | So far so good, I'm going to keep reading. |
| Nolaknowsmyname 2007-04-16 ch 2, | I love this story already! I hope you update frequently. |
| Quinn and his Quill 2007-04-05 ch 1, | Haha, Blythe's father reached for a Derringer instead of a gun. Witty. |
| Saint Apollo 2007-04-04 ch 1, | It's definately really enjoyable. I love how you really captured the feel of the 1800's with your writing. =) |