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Reviews For: Game Over

Twilight Starr
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseIt can be sad to see something come to an end or it can be happy. Great job!

~Twilight Starr~
say this sooner
2007-04-20
ch 1,
abuseoh, i like this. nice ending line, i love how the last word is bolded, it makes everything seem more...final, i think. anyway, great job with this.
Slightly Bruised And Broken
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abusei think it might be a little vague. i like it otherwise.
life like whoa
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI love the positive optimistic attitude =]

I love "winning" that game. It's such a relief to be able to detach yourself finally from that one person who had a hold of you so tightly.
DayDreamer64
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abuseCool. I liked it, very strong and poweful poem about love. Liked it. Keep up the good work.

DayDreamer64
smile for the sunshine
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abuseoo--I like it. Such a positive tone. That's something uncommon lately. Thanks for the encouragement. Great job!
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