It can be sad to see something come to an end or it can be happy. Great job!

Twilight Starr

oh, i like this. nice ending line, i love how the last word is bolded, it makes everything seem more...final, i think. anyway, great job with this.

i think it might be a little vague. i like it otherwise.

I love the positive optimistic attitude ]

I love "winning" that game. It's such a relief to be able to detach yourself finally from that one person who had a hold of you so tightly.

Cool. I liked it, very strong and poweful poem about love. Liked it. Keep up the good work.

DayDreamer64

oo-I like it. Such a positive tone. That's something uncommon lately. Thanks for the encouragement. Great job!