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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseIt can be sad to see something come to an end or it can be happy. Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| say this sooner 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseoh, i like this. nice ending line, i love how the last word is bolded, it makes everything seem more...final, i think. anyway, great job with this. |
| Slightly Bruised And Broken 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abusei think it might be a little vague. i like it otherwise. |
| life like whoa 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the positive optimistic attitude =] I love "winning" that game. It's such a relief to be able to detach yourself finally from that one person who had a hold of you so tightly. |
| DayDreamer64 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseCool. I liked it, very strong and poweful poem about love. Liked it. Keep up the good work. DayDreamer64 |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseoo--I like it. Such a positive tone. That's something uncommon lately. Thanks for the encouragement. Great job! |