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| jenifer ayrs 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abusehm, i see what you mean. i was just uploading whatever was finished, i didnt stop to edit it. next time i'm working on the sequals i'll give this chapter a once-over, maybe prolong the time it takes Kevin to turn back and make Jody more scared- she is being chased by a big darn wolf afterall- thanks for the review |
| guess who's back babies 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was truly scary in the beginning. But towards the end it go too easy for the protaganists. You also had some spelling errors but i still like the idea of this. -CLC |