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jenifer ayrs
2007-04-08
ch 1,
abusehm, i see what you mean. i was just uploading whatever was finished, i didnt stop to edit it. next time i'm working on the sequals i'll give this chapter a once-over, maybe prolong the time it takes Kevin to turn back and make Jody more scared- she is being chased by a big darn wolf afterall- thanks for the review
guess who's back babies
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abuseThis was truly scary in the beginning.

But towards the end it go too easy for the protaganists.

You also had some spelling errors but i still like the idea of this.

-CLC
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