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simpleplan13
2007-05-25
ch 1,
I like this a lot... the stream of consciousness in the first stanza is great and I love the ending because its so ambiguous, which is awesome... i also like the line "it's pretty funny" im not sure why i like it so much but i do.. lol
Airaceir
2007-05-07
ch 1,
I love your style! =D and i like your poems. Really i like them alot. And thanks for reviewing Flight. ^^

Smile,
Aira
A Creature of Literature
2007-04-09
ch 1,
I am not quite sure I understand. Perhaps I am not meant to understand the complexities of the mind. I like the form that you used, it is interesting that there arent any capital letters. Your grammar is impeccable.
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