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Tara.Lady of Shalott
2008-11-24
ch 1,
My favorite is Little white lies, little glass hearts
Kimera77
2008-11-12
ch 1,
I love two: “This will only hurt a bit…”

and: Welcome to Hell. Enjoy your Stay.

Maybe a little bit of both? :)
Hop Skip Jump
2008-09-16
ch 1,
Welcome to Hell. Enjoy your stay.

“This will only hurt a bit…”

He grabbed, she grabbed, both missed.

He was right. Don’t tell him.

Saturday night, new shirt, nobody home.

New! Pain Sundae, drizzled with distress.

Those are really funny, good job.
DC
2008-04-10
ch 1,
Cute! Especially the first one!
XD
2008-01-26
ch 1,
“Why don’t we ever talk anymore!?”

“Did you check under the rug?”

He was right. Don’t tell him.

He grabbed, she grabbed, both missed.

-the best :)
hopefaithgrace
2007-11-04
ch 1,
Personally, my favorite two are;
'Welcome to hell. Enjoy your stay.'
and,
'He was right. Don't tell him.'

I am now thinking of six words stories, its kind of addictive!
Major Major Major
2007-10-23
ch 1,
wow. that's a really cool idea. My favorite is "He grabbed, she grabbed, both missed." I just had this image in my brain of when my three-year-old cousin fell down the steps. It happened just like that.

Anyway, like I said. you get a round of a applause :D
tour d'ivoire
2007-09-22
ch 1,
Oh baby.
I love this.
You do it extremely well and maybe I'll try someday because I am absolutely inspired by you, dear. [:
GryphonFledglingOfSilverWin...
2007-08-27
ch 1,
Yo!

I know it's pretty old, but I figured I had to return all your review favors at some point in time...

*stares in awe*

I wish I could tell stories in six words. My problem is using too many words. Editing is a nightmare, I can tell you.

But anyway, I think that my two favorites would have to be:
"God here... no thanks." Damn telemarketers.

and

He was right. Don't tell him.

Definitely the two best in my own opinion. I'm sure you have your own favorites, but those are mine. hehe...

Anyway, just wanted to send another note of thanks for your wonderful reviews and lasting dedication. Everyone else except itse seems to have left me. *sniff*

But enough about me. Great jobs with both brevity and wit. Quite the masterpieces, all of them.

~GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
TreeCreature
2007-08-04
ch 1,
"He was right. Don’t tell him."

That one is my favourite, actually. These were all very interesting, though. C:
Alfsigesey
2007-06-20
ch 1,
I wanna try...

Damn. It would have been so clever if I left one as a review, but nothing's coming.

Good show!

Alf
Yuval
2007-05-12
ch 1,
My favourite is "did you check under the rug?"

It's so deep and meaningful! And there are so many conclusions that can be drawn!

(Actually, I like it because it could lead into a story about a sentient piece of moudly pizza, but these are all nifty nonetheless.)
someone's sideshow
2007-04-06
ch 1,
i like the telemarketer one. woo!
Drifting One
2007-04-05
ch 1,
I like the first one, the 4th and 5th one, the 8th one, and the last one! They were all rather funny!
Katrina Zeffirelli
2007-04-04
ch 1,
This is very cool!
I like:
-Welcome to Hell. Enjoy your stay. (It's just... funny!)
-"This will only hurt a bit..." (A classic line- it tells a lot.)
-He was right. Don't tell him. (I like this one a lot! Don't know exactly why, but it's really good.)
-Saturday night, new shirt, nobody home. (I think a lot of people- mainly girls- can relate to this. I like it.)

=)
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