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| Ashelin 2007-06-15 ch 1,   | Yeah, I'm a little late, but this was so beautiful. The end was just...perfect. Some of my favorite lines: "I felt his eyes like I hadn't felt eyes before." "Talk. And talk and found each other's/Being. I held his being, for one bare second." Those were so beautiful. I just loved the story. It was wonderful. Keep it up. As Always Ashelin |