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| sweets555 2007-07-10 ch 1, | i love it. you should do poetry more often, when ever you do its rivetting, or at least what i have seen of it. great job, keep it up! |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-07-04 ch 1, | Your writing style is intriguing and, yes, this is definitely something to be proud of. Your writing was amazing in this poem, but I do have one thing to suggest: at the end, add just one more line. I'm not sure, but I don't think "that's it, I've had it / You had your chance" really ties it in. It's really up to you... But really, I did like your poem. It was beautiful. It held real emotional value, unlike most other melodramatic poems (like mine, for example - no point to them). Keep writing, really, you're amazing. -STIX- |
| melbell 2007-06-28 ch 1, | i really like this... good job! i'm adding to my favorites =] |
| maybewerecrazy 2007-04-04 ch 1, | i like it. and if i ur talking about what i said to you when i told u that i dont have a life eitherr adn u thought i didnt mean it... im sorry. but hey its 100% true now... tony and ally broke up. alex and dommy and erin are verry frusterated with me so yeah... but anywho. its good. i really enjoyed this one. |
| livenlaughnlove 2007-04-04 ch 1, | wow, that was REALLY good!! |