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Reviews For: Across the Endless Sea

Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe...
2007-04-30
ch 1,
Upon finishing this poem for the second time I have to say that you have captured a great portrait of enduring love.
I tend to stay away from lines that rhyme, preferring free verse instead, but you pull it off well and with a very human feel.
Well Done!
Room Without A Door
2007-04-04
ch 1,
Thanks for the review!

Love the rhyming you've got going on here - it flows so well together. There's a few really great lines and images here. "But across the Endless Sea, Forgiveness waits for me", those lines really jump out at me. Nicely done, hope to read more from you soon!
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