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| xDancingintheRainx 2007-07-12 ch 1,   | This is amazing! I love the emotion here and the imagery is intense! I really like the lines "and for goodness sake we're just so perfect for each other (in such a twisted way)" So simple, but so intense at the same time. Very well written. Excellent work! This is going on my favorites. |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2007-07-03 ch 1, | I'm so sorry for waiting so long to read this! It was amazing. Definitely one of my favorites! Don't ever stop writing. |
| fallin4ualwayz 2007-07-01 ch 1, | once again... wow! |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-05-31 ch 1, | Wow, violent and powerful imagery, amazing. |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-04-13 ch 1, | oh wow, i can relate to this completely. its perfection, but you know in your heart that perfection is impossible, and it drives the mind insane. great work keep writing |
| iona-buss 2007-04-08 ch 1, | Very well expressed. Really well written. Well done :) |
| skitly 2007-04-05 ch 1, | (huge smile) wow, just wow!! I like it, its very intense and gripping, keep up the greatness!! xoxoxo skitly |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-04-05 ch 1, | I love this! Brilliant emotion and feeling in this. Thanks for the review! Rowan. |
| Ashelin 2007-04-05 ch 1, | I relate so much. Love is so freakin confusing. Makes me want to go and shoot him then somehow bring him back to life again. Wonderful job, and thanks for the review! |
| carousel chorus 2007-04-05 ch 1, | This is amazing! Im adding to my Favorites. ~PottersSweetie17 |
| say this sooner 2007-04-04 ch 1, | amazing. i really, really loved it. great job. |
| i.am.the.winter 2007-04-04 ch 1, | a very confused voice, but a very clear poem. i love the lines "you bleed a stunning shade of red/while i bleed a haunting black." haunting indeed...this one's going on my favourites! =) -- i.am.the.winter |