gaarhh! first you fake break up with one of my best friends, then you fake kill the other, and his pretend love!! *sob* so heartless. i better watch out, 'cause i think i see a patern here... just kidding. nice one shot with Hagler. it was hard and determined, yet it had a poetic ending. weird, but every time i think of a poem, i want it to rhyme so badly...
author person/shaggywolf

hehehehe Romeo and Juliet much?

OMG! That's terrible! that was frickin awesome though!

Nyahahahaha. nice. does the character later gain curage enough to ask Loki out by, say, email? beaches are awesome. nice twist. i thought that it was all a dream and when she woke up, it was that morning and she had dreamed of the day before hand, and it would be like the day restarted. ya know what i am trying to say, because i just can't seem to get it right. ahh!! anyway, this could be more than a one chapter story. awesome.
author person/shaggywolf