omg that's soo true!
ur poemss really have meaning
and i like it :)

First off, technical stuff. Punctuation, I would recommend that you punctuate the whole piece (you've only got a handful of commas and an ellipsis right now, which actually should be three dots).

It's very teen-angsty and as such, a little dull in it's language. You can write an angry poem, just make it interesting. The repetition of the first two lines, the "I know that I" is a little dull off the bat. Grab your readers with those lines, really pull them in (that's what they're there for).

It's also quite prosaic, devoid of imagery and a poetic voice. Vivid it up and try to make us see your individual situation, what quirks make this topic interesting.

.:midnight:.