|Reviews for Golden Bubble|
| IdeasInTheAir 7/27/07 . chapter 1
I love it! It's very cool, the way you described the bubble and the finger. It makes a good picture, for a moment. Then THE FINGER comes. duhduhduh.
So, I still think it's really well written. Very cool! I already said that, didn't I? Oh, well, I'm enforcing my point! Very well done!
| tearing hands 4/15/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful. My favorite metaphor is the first one. "Petted" in the second last line seems a little awkward/out of place... I like the last line a lot, too.
| continuous brevity 4/12/07 . chapter 1
wow, beautiful. great work.
| Coolforever11Emily from Neo 4/6/07 . chapter 1
"then you are the person who finally made it stop."
I don't like that line. You can make it so much stronger. Gah! If only you wrote novels, I would adore a novel by you!
And this one was great, I loved the metaphor. Nice, nice, nice. :)
| Ashelin 4/5/07 . chapter 1
Wow. This was awesome. I loved it. Just the whole metaphors and everything. It was beautiful. Great job!
| MirrorMirrorOnTheWall 4/5/07 . chapter 1
Exquisite! I really do love it, especially the begginning! Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, writers block and vacationing! Hope to start writing soon!
| a silenced revolution 4/4/07 . chapter 1
How unfortunate :(
I adore the comparisons/metaphors (which is it? :/)
*adds to faves*