Ooh, nice. I like this, and of course I'm glad that you used my earlier comment for inspiration. The rhythm and formatting work together nicely and your words are pretty good and intense. I like the first line especially.

Great piece! I have this awesome image in my head, thanks to this poem. :)
~Cristina

Well, James, maybe you should check your spelling before you insult someone's story...angles? From what I gathered, she was talking about Angels...there is a difference you know.

Childe, honey, it was a lovely piece...
Later.

screw you. you dont know a thing about angles.
THEYRE NOT REAL!
retard

Beautiful...and how perfect for the holiday!