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| Chidori Nadare 2007-09-11 ch 1,   | I like the title ^^ (so weird...) My interpretations: 'Unspoken words die': Umm...could this mean lies that is so obvious but never noticed? Well, it could also mean that he/she wants to tell the truth but no one belives him/her. 'On the tongues of the hopeless': It could represent ignorance (check the both intepretations above), the lies are never noticed because ignorance or that they know it's true but they ignore it. 'Bleeding those who dream': I really like this line. Honestly, the only thing I could come up with is that ignorance kills everything (in a sense). Somewhat abstract-like. This line sort of changed the direction of the haiku, like a straight path then it turned into a curve. *Does this haiku mean that ignorance is both a blessing and a curse? I don't know why, but this is what I came up with at the end. Thank you for sharing this very complex haiku. Great job! -C.N |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-25 ch 1, | awesome last line |
| Basara 2007-04-08 ch 1, | ouch... nice... |
| B.S. Ha 2007-04-06 ch 1, | interesting use of "party" in the title good job overall, but i dont really understand the last line ~forestpsych |
| burning in effigy 2007-04-04 ch 1, | i absolutely love the title; funny how well it fits with the haiku love the concept (inspiration?) for the haiku; excellent way of conveying your thoughts fantastic job |