 Chidori Nadare 2007-09-11 . chapter 1I like the title ^^ (so weird...) My interpretations:
'Unspoken words die': Umm...could this mean lies that is so obvious but never noticed? Well, it could also mean that he/she wants to tell the truth but no one belives him/her.
'On the tongues of the hopeless': It could represent ignorance (check the both intepretations above), the lies are never noticed because ignorance or that they know it's true but they ignore it.
'Bleeding those who dream': I really like this line. Honestly, the only thing I could come up with is that ignorance kills everything (in a sense). Somewhat abstract-like. This line sort of changed the direction of the haiku, like a straight path then it turned into a curve.
*Does this haiku mean that ignorance is both a blessing and a curse? I don't know why, but this is what I came up with at the end.
Thank you for sharing this very complex haiku. Great job!
-C.N |