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Chidori Nadare 2007-09-11 . chapter 1
I like the title ^^ (so weird...) My interpretations:

'Unspoken words die': Umm...could this mean lies that is so obvious but never noticed? Well, it could also mean that he/she wants to tell the truth but no one belives him/her.

'On the tongues of the hopeless': It could represent ignorance (check the both intepretations above), the lies are never noticed because ignorance or that they know it's true but they ignore it.

'Bleeding those who dream': I really like this line. Honestly, the only thing I could come up with is that ignorance kills everything (in a sense). Somewhat abstract-like. This line sort of changed the direction of the haiku, like a straight path then it turned into a curve.

*Does this haiku mean that ignorance is both a blessing and a curse? I don't know why, but this is what I came up with at the end.

Thank you for sharing this very complex haiku. Great job!

-C.N
simpleplan13 2007-05-25 . chapter 1
awesome last line
Basara 2007-04-08 . chapter 1
ouch...

nice...
B.S. Ha 2007-04-06 . chapter 1
interesting use of "party" in the title
good job overall, but i dont really understand the last line
~forestpsych
burning in effigy 2007-04-04 . chapter 1
i absolutely love the title; funny how well it fits with the haiku

love the concept (inspiration?) for the haiku; excellent way of conveying your thoughts

fantastic job
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