Such a thought provoking piece. I like. -nods-

...how can something so short be so good? That last line is just so effective. I don't even know why, all I know is that this poem is really good. I love the imagery it conjures up.

However, the meaning of this piece (because it sounds suspiciously as if there is one) eludes me. ^_^'' (God I suck so bad...)

This poem makes me feel vulnerable and paranoid.

But, I assure you, in a good way. :)

Happy Writing.

Love: WWK

very strong use of words.
it makes me think of life and the way people live it and just i duno how fragile life is.
powerful peice..
excellent..

Cute.