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| JJSLAM2129 2007-04-05 ch 1,  | abusePersonally, if you wanted this to be a play, you should have posted it in the 'Play' section. I can understand why you want it in the Fantasy section, because it has swords and magic and the like. Another problem is that the story is FAR too much like the Broadway version, save the fact that it's about swordsmanship and not the theatre. If this were written as an actual story, it might be nice. Just be careful not to plagiarize too much of Leroux/Webber's story ideas! ( :: ) |