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| Lyn-san 2007-09-23 ch 8,   | ... O.o 1-800-Neo-Evil? o.O Operation Catfood?? O.O' LOL LMAO! Oh, by the way, here's a tip: You should write out the 'Laws of Anime'. It'd add to the reading experience. (lol - reading experience - lol) Anyway, I laughed a lot with this one. So, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Gambatte (Good luck!) Lyn-san. |
| Lyn-san 2007-09-23 ch 7, | ...Ikori... Hm. Sounds familiar, ne? It's certainly been a while since I last reviewed a story, so I figured I'd kick things off with yours. So, I see we have a new character in our midst, I look forward to reading the next chapter, so I'll talk to you then! :] Ja ne (for now) Lyn-san |
| RedLady 2007-08-27 ch 5, | "You're evil!" "Oh yeah, we'll you're an **!" LOL! Genius. I don't think the japanese people know about the... ahem... Ghettoh. Anime laws don't work here. Dying of one bullet shot. Hah hah! It's just like real life! OH NOES! |
| RedLady 2007-08-27 ch 4, | oh this just gets better and better I LOVE IT! |
| RedLady 2007-08-27 ch 2, | He learned flail. HAH HAH! I cracked up. Chakra? What about ki? |
| King of Kings 2007-07-10 ch 1, | Heh, heh...this was great! Wonderful parody. ;) The scenes with the old lady, and with Tokoro were hilarious, and of course the end was great. I look forward to reading the rest of this! ^^ |
| Lyn-san 2007-05-03 ch 5, | Yeah!! It's in chapters!! Whoho! Can I add your story to my C2 Community please? Lyn-san |
| Lyn-san 2007-04-09 ch 1, | Well well well, what do we have here?? Hmm?? You know, No matter how many times I read this... I still laugh. A lot. That says something (Ps. I told Dax about your story.) Now, What u need to do is seperate the story into individual chapters. (This means you'll have to delete the story and put it back up. Only this time, when you upload it, Leave chapter 1 and erase the rest. Save changes. Follow through wit the rest of the instructions to get it on the website. Then, upload the story again, delete chap 1, leave chapter 2, and delete everything after that. Save changes. Follow the rest of the instruction and you'll have chapter 2. Repeat until all 8 chapters are up. they'll be on individual pages. If you're still experiencing problems, send me a message. just click on my name in the review section, and click send message when the window comes up. Or you can just tell me when next we meet in Java. Yeah. Anyways, Good story, and please update soon!? Onegai? Sayonara Lyn-san |