Reviews for Metal Banana Pie is Special

snowdance-lyghtning 2008-06-13 ch 1,	abuseO.O . . . . . . wow. Anyway, very interesting story. JUNE IS AWESOME! No matter the awesomeness, I found some grammatical errors. 1) When June calls herself unique, "unique" shouldn't be capitolized. 2)Lists of three things should have two commas. Like: June, Alex, and the Fair Damsel. 3)"Lets" should be "Let's" because it's short for "Let us". 4)There should be commas between each time June says "Spuddy" when she's calling the Potatoking. 5)When Alex is saying how they're supposed to watch the DVD, he says "aren't supposed" instead of "aren't we/you supposed". and a bunch of others. So, please use SpellCheck on the document thing and read your work before posting this.
Anon. 2007-12-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, that's... very.. uhh... randomn. That's the word. I still don't get how the title comes into view. I like the title though...
eternalfreedom 2007-04-10 ch 1,	abusePotatoking the evil but very cool flying sheep for President!