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| multiples of six 2007-04-05 ch 1,   | I like this a lot, despite how creepy it is. It reminded me a little bit of the title song from The Phantom Of The Opera.. maybe just because of the two voices crossing over. Anyway, it's an interesting idea & I really like the way you fleshed it out. And in the book Lolita, I got same impression as the ending implies. Nice job! =) |