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| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1,   | Sweet, really well written, I see no ways it could improve, great poem, keep writting, so i'll keep reading! ~Lurid~ |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-05-18 ch 1, | Again another great point. Nice work! Kristie Marie |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-04-05 ch 1, | Bravo! *TSP |
| Tytherpol 2007-04-05 ch 1, | I love the first three lines. (: the 'this time' is peculiar. |