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| chakra.spirit 2008-10-16 ch 1,   | wow just wow simply one of the best poems i've ever read the melancholy, the pain, the suffering, such a deep meaning, god, i love it you're definitely good at this and i'll definitely check your other poems out, if you have more, that is xP anyways, just here to express some love and till next time Carpe Diem =3 |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | Wow, looks like you've put deep thought into each word, really well written, great job, keep writting! ~Lurid~ |
| Gingitsune-chan 2007-10-23 ch 1, | I love Vast, so when I saw your summary saying one of their songs inspired you, I had to check it out. Not bad... I was not disappointed. Keep writing because I think you have a lot of potential... |
| HiddenFlame42 2007-04-13 ch 1, | WOW. I don't really know what else to say other than wow. The images...the actual melody this put in my head. Matthew, you've outdone yourself. I'm definitely coming lack to read this one again later and if I get the melody worked out I'll let you hear it if you want. Wow... |
| Ironic Presence 2007-04-07 ch 1, | Whoa. Very powerful. It actually reminded me of a work I have, called "A Field of Broken Glass". Perhaps you'd like to check it out and review, and while you're there, help me in my pathetic attempt at poetry. The best word I can use to describe the mood of this is "tragedy". Maybe. Keep writing. Presence. |
| justaguy 2007-04-06 ch 1, | You know that I am a fan, always. I am not sure that I got the "Shards of broken glass lingering in my feet." I was wondering about them beingon the ground, all around your feet. To me lingering sounds like the shards choose to "linger." I do love the idea of "A world where it rains broken glass." Hugs to my friend. Just hoping you will explain it for me and give me a deeper meaning. There is an old song that I always liked. I can not remember the title, but it said... "People stop and stare, I can't see their faces. Only the echos of their minds." I want to do something with that as a motivation one day. Take care, my friend. |
| say this sooner 2007-04-05 ch 1, | amazing poem, great job! |
| Liebchen Rose 2007-04-05 ch 1, | Beatuiful darling, though a few of the stanzas seem a little off to me. :/ |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-04-05 ch 1, | You always write beautifully! BRAVO! Best Wishes! *TSP |