Reviews for The Time of the Knife

Faeya 2007-06-06 ch 2,	A tad short, but it's still intriguing. It might be a little rushed (don't trust me though, my opinion is far from, like, great or anything), but me still likey. Keep going at it.
Callitha 2007-04-05 ch 1,	Good beginning. Avoid run-on sentences. The pronouns get mixed up very easily, making the sentence harder to read and understand. I like how you jumped into the action and didn't info-dump, good job with that. Maybe put in more clues about the enivornment and culture to help us paint a picture. Keep writing!