i think this is my fav. piece of yours. very nice and I like the title..adds to the poem very well and it was thought out and unique. great job.

Wow. Great piece, I like your style of poetry. It portrays a sense of need, need of friends, of peace, of something better.

Again great writing..

This was really good! I wrote something like this once but it had a different vibe. I love your style, please keep going!