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| Eyes of Olympus 2007-04-11 ch 2,   | wow - the writing just seems to flow off of my screen and somehow crawls vividly into my mind. At least you didn't make it too graphic. If anyone wants to write about rape, they should write about it respectfully, not to violent, not too graphic. Just like you write. Good job. ~ EoO ~ |
| Eyes of Olympus 2007-04-11 ch 1, | It's so... bloody! Good job on the details. I like the way you wrote this story because some of the words are plainly emphasized in bold - and how it makes you feel. The words you used were graphic - like you painted a picture in my mind. This indeed is good. Thank you ~ EoO ~ |
| Wicca Girl 2007-04-05 ch 1, | Why is she crying? why are all these things happening to her? Why would she be hated by people that use to love her? Theses are the questions that will haunt me until u update. UPDATE ASAP. Good Job especially with the suspense. |