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| The baava Project 2007-05-21 ch 4,  | abuseDreamy quality. I like your descriptives, still. Very dreamy, very foggy . . . Being trapped in Christus's head makes it feel like the world is going by in a daze. Prettily written. :) ~ baava |
| Sistine the Angel of Hell 2007-04-09 ch 3, | abuseok..i'm throughly confused. to many things happening at once, and you aren't resolving one matter before moving on to the next. Like on the bus, what happened there, and such. other then that, it is great. Signed, Sistine |
| The baava Project 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseHi. This is an interesting start. I was just passing through and decided to try this out . . . and found that I liked something about Christus. Not sure what, since this introduction doesn't really say much. I kind of liked the image given [angelic and debauched all at once], because it's mirrored in the way he speaks. Threatening and crybabyish all at once. The last line is a killer. I do hope there will be more. I'd kind of like to keep reading. yours, baava |