Really nice; I especially like the lines 'But warmth does fade to clear the dark of night/The moon at times the dark it does outshine.' One thing I noticed though, is that the last line doesn't really make all that much sense; you're saying the descriptor is the subject instead of vice-versa, if that makes any sense. I can see how you might have done it to get the rhyme, but it makes the sentence feel kind of funny. In any case, I enjoyed reading it.