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| X.x.XJodzterX.x.X 2007-06-11 ch 2,  | abuseGreat Start!! I wonder if Brit will ever go with James or if he'll keep being an ** like in the first half of the first chapter?!? I guess I'll just have to wait and see! Please UPDATE soon cause if you do I'll be so happy! lol x x x |
| Olivine 2007-04-23 ch 2, | abuseYou know, I once tried reading a story about these people who were in bands or something involving song-singing, where the author attempted to write songs that went along with the story, but it turned out terrible because the songs took a lot away from the rest of the story. I really like the way you're writing this, so far, and James is hilarious. The only thing I'm worried about is how violent they might get, and if you're going to start paying more attention to this little beauty, than your other stories. Like Once Upon A Time In Lavender Dreams. Which you have not updated since...-gasp- December?! Wow. That's a long time. Unless Fictionpress is lying... But, anyways, Brit really reminds me of Avril Lavigne. I have AOL Music on Demand, and all that jazz 'n pizzaz, and I was watching the making of her new CD, The Best Damn Thing, and she really does remind me of your main character. So I'm just going to be imagining her as Avril. And I'll make up an image for James. But I really like this, so update soon. -RofT |
| omaterluna 2007-04-19 ch 2, | abusei like this story very much Absolutely love James. lol |
| perdita's kiss 2007-04-18 ch 2, | abusejames=yummy as **. |
| Olivine 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseOh a new story! And it looks like it's gonna be a good one! But then how many of your stories weren't good? Just update soon. Ha. Ha. --greyhound. |
| perdita's kiss 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abusehaha, it's a good start, i already love james. you have a good plot and set up, so get updating!! |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHe seemed pretty nice towards the end, though. Hmm... I wonder why he hates her so much? *Gasp!* Could it be because he actually likes her? Lol. Anyways, looking good, update again soon! :D |
| Madeline Bicoa-Ryne 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOoh. I'm interested. I'm reading. Add more. Nicki |