u dont have to change urself to be u
im writing a story about that plz check it out wen its up

ur an amzin poet
how do u write like this ?
any pointers plzz plzz plzz

may God be with whoeva u lost

again this is wow
im currently in this place
shud i tell him or not ?

oh my gosh is this true?
i dont mean to pry or anything
but it was really ... it was awesome
but i bet ur betta than ur sista if it is true
Lil Miz Alice

oh wow i didn't realize this had many other poems lool
again, this poem is really amazing.
i like how you ended this one and the other really well :)

This is amazing (the poem itself)
and the message is so strong. wow.
hopefully things will get better for you :)
...but does she have your writing abilities? se? LOL.
xox, take care! - killerqueen-hearts.
ps. fantastic poem!

its weird, the same thing happened to me. I like this guy named Aiden at my school, like, really like him. But a few days ago one of my friends totally embarassed me by asking him if he liked me, he repliedby saying;
"EW! No way! Every body says she's a lesbian. Aren't you?"
I was totally heart broken but i kept inside, cause usually, this guy is the nicest most considerate person you will ever meet. But i still like him.

this is really deep but (Cheesy i no) i can feel what your feeling. My sister does so many things wrong but she never gets into trouble cause she's like pretty and smart. My parents like never talk to me when she's around, and i'v been waiting 4 years for my mum to take me out so we can spend time together.
So yeah, i feal your pain.

p.s. can you R&R my poem 'How is it right'?
thanx (if you want to)

I just wanted to say that your poem was really good and i can tell that you really ment it. i can kinda relate, my parents ADORE my sister, they give her everything and she has no idea how lucky she is. your poems awesome

hey wondering when you're going to update my not so average life..amazing story and its been a couple of months

I have felt that way before, in dreams, in real life...

I love your poems. They're so powerful and so full of emotion. I could relate to them when I was reading them, and that was awesome. I love the rhyme schemes of your poems as well, and I think that they have excellent imagery and really great inspiration behind them. They're sad and realistic, and that makes them all the better to read and relate to. I'm sorry for what you've been through; I think you've done a good job of putting it all in words, and I wish you all the best :)

Exactly. I've seen women and girls who starve themselves to look "good". Some boys too.

i'm sorry.
i know how you feel...
my brother is the same way.
that last line is very powerful,
but the rhyme isnt good and it takes away from the poem.
if you lost the rhyme and fixed the punctuation on this
it would be much better and would flow a lot smoother.

~Black and White Dreams~