That was really sad. Van deserves to be loved.

*Kicks the piano for Van*.
Danny is a total betch, and Van should find someone who can
say "I love you" back to him in the way that he deserves.
EGAD I'm never reading this while listening to Yiruma's 'River
Flows In You' again, and this might sound weird, but thanks
for making me cry. Really.

Aww... That's really sad. I love my music the way Danny loves his piano... I feel really sorry for Van.
Lee

I really liked it! Piano men always ignore their lovers. i feeld sad for them. really i do.

anyways, it was really a good good piece of work! *smiles*

this is so.. sad and heartbreaking
and i love it soo much
+fav

That was so sad, I was really hoping they'd figure it out, or Danny would explain it (whatever it really was) to Van, but he didn't. If Van suddenly turns straight on the other hand, can I have him? lol
Great job =)
~Mia

I like this. It's sad and regretful and you get those two emotions onto the page wonderfully.
The way you ended it is, epic, is the word I want to use. It's classically sad.
Good Job!

That was sad. Poignant. You are TOO good.

This is perfect. Your words are wonderfully fluid and you tie together time so easily, its like reading someone's memories. I really, really liked this! It was so.. heated. And the ending, I lovedd it!!

:O its brilliant.

Lovely... so sad :( Great work!

I wasn't really sure what to expect with this, but I got it. I understood it and I like it a lot. I think that that you did a nice job~

Wow. This is an excellent piece that's powerful. I like how you sectioned the story into parts; it makes the story somehow flow more cohesively. However, I do find the paragraphing a tad odd but it doesn't affect the overall experience.

Overall, a wonderful read. :)

This was so well written, and I can relate so well to the characters. Mostly Danny, though. I think you captured the artist's heart so well. We don't love anything but our art...

I love a story that makes me feel. For something so short, it sure gave me a lot of feeling, and the characters you portrayed are so realistic in such a short time. Beautifully done.

good story...but it made me sad. but hey, not all stories can be rainbow's and smiles and gay boys in good relationships right? ^_~

good job.