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| suicide girls and death boy... 2007-11-18 ch 1,  | abusethis is so.. sad and heartbreaking and i love it soo much +fav |
| mia5081 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad, I was really hoping they'd figure it out, or Danny would explain it (whatever it really was) to Van, but he didn't. If Van suddenly turns straight on the other hand, can I have him? lol Great job =) ~Mia |
| Blackbird-chan 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's sad and regretful and you get those two emotions onto the page wonderfully. The way you ended it is, epic, is the word I want to use. It's classically sad. Good Job! |
| Amindaya 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was sad. Poignant. You are TOO good. |
| super happy nuclear girl 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is perfect. Your words are wonderfully fluid and you tie together time so easily, its like reading someone's memories. I really, really liked this! It was so.. heated. And the ending, I lovedd it!! :O its brilliant. |
| magalina 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseLovely... so sad :( Great work! |
| Maris. S 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI wasn't really sure what to expect with this, but I got it. I understood it and I like it a lot. I think that that you did a nice job~ |
| virginangelic 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is an excellent piece that's powerful. I like how you sectioned the story into parts; it makes the story somehow flow more cohesively. However, I do find the paragraphing a tad odd but it doesn't affect the overall experience. Overall, a wonderful read. :) |
| Silvae 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was so well written, and I can relate so well to the characters. Mostly Danny, though. I think you captured the artist's heart so well. We don't love anything but our art... I love a story that makes me feel. For something so short, it sure gave me a lot of feeling, and the characters you portrayed are so realistic in such a short time. Beautifully done. |
| Sinister Slash 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abusegood story...but it made me sad. but hey, not all stories can be rainbow's and smiles and gay boys in good relationships right? ^_~ good job. |