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cbprice25
2008-10-11
ch 1,
Very cute.
toffeecakesxox.
2008-10-04
ch 1,
Aw, so cute! :D I love the end! And EVERYTHING, actually! :]
Need 'n' Know
2008-09-17
ch 1,
Hah, I see. That's a cute title, too. Lol, then it'll only be about him and her, that's cute.

> > > "... So just listen to me and get up so I treat your goddamn wounds,” I clenched out.
Just missed a word, no worries.

> > > I forced his train of thought to take a different track.
Was the guy talking about himself? @.@

> > > ... before he heading towards one of the cabinets to pull out his First Aid Kit.

There's a lot of "s" words, Mr. Riaz. Sorry. Shut up. And swear, lol, it's so emphasized, look at it! And serious, I think. Besides the obvious. OKay, moving on.

Aww, that really was sweet. The small roles, Keith and the ex, lol. Poor Gerald. Everything's already said, what more is there to add? Yeps... hmm, not sure what else I can add to my comments.

The thing is, the ending's left open. I'm wondering how their lives will turn out and stuff. Lol, curiosity will kill the cat one day! And I really do like that exchange. It's so... nice. Very nice. In fact, nice won't even amount up to how very nice it was. ^.^

Thanks for sharing the story!

Need 'n' Know.
Lovedward48
2008-09-13
ch 1,
Good job!!
I Murder on Impulse
2008-09-10
ch 1,
FANTASTIC STORY!
XX
veautiful
2008-08-18
ch 1,
swet :)
sheeparelove22
2008-08-14
ch 1,
OMG. i freaking love your work. ive read every story like 878467586746874586 times and i swear to god, each time, it's just as amazing! i LOVE YOUR ONE-SHOTS :)
Electric Rose.
2008-08-06
ch 1,
Aww! So adorable :)
Kyllex of Darkness
2008-07-14
ch 1,
Aww! OMG, this was so cute it's not even funny. I love how they both feel so intoxicated by the other, and are in major denial. They're adorable. And jeez, her ex-boyfriend is really scare. He could've killed her! Or raped her! Or both!

Anyway, perfect ending to a perfect story. great job! I'd make a longer review but I have to go to bed now. So bye! :D

-kyllex
JustAnotherLibroLover
2008-07-09
ch 1,
Aw! That was adorable! Love it!
lala7768
2008-06-24
ch 1,
okay that's just way too cute
Hakunamattata
2008-06-07
ch 1,
I Love the story! A perfect one shot. keep writing ;)

P.S
Plz r/r my story and tell me what you think.
jet.and.bobsy
2008-06-06
ch 1,
Really great story. :]
katieee
2008-05-14
ch 1,
I love this. :]
found.eventually
2008-05-04
ch 1,
Oh! I think I've read this before, back when I was still uhm, the kind of reader that lurks around fictionpress with no penname whatsoever. And I didn't know we could do anonymous reviews.

Anyway. I love this one-shot. :) Loved it the first time I read it, still loving it the second time.

AND AUSTIN IS SUCH A MAN. In the whole, I'm-a-macho-man-so-even-if-i'm-in-love-i-can't-turn-all-sappy way. I found myself giggling over countless parts throughout this story, and despite its length, I wasn't bored. Not at all.

He'll be there to catch her. I think that's the best line. Ever.
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