Amazingly powerful. So sad and beautiful. I really love your works!

Shayla

The imagery in this was very vivid and powerful. Loved it!

"She pockets dirty green and walks away

Tainted again"

beautiful. it was filled with description and truth. I liked it a lot. Although the ending seems kinda of incomplete, but very complete at the same time. I don't know, maybe it's just me.

Thank you for your review.

I shall read more of your stuff!

Good job and keep on writing.

That was sad, but that's the only way some women can make a living.

SirScott

Wow. I felt the emotion...

Don't worry, you're not the only person who writes strange things sometimes.

Rowan.

Sad... But it's a great description I think. I like it a lot too.