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Phoenix II 2007-04-06 . chapter 1
Oh yeah...your birthday's coming up, isn't it?

Is that talking-to-the-picture thing going to become a sort of a theme for Matthew? I think it would be good if it did, because it shows ...something, I don't quite know what. I don't know if people who lose their spouse normally do anything like that, but it seems like it would fit with the character as you have him currently established.

I like Mike(sorry, Michael :D)'s character quirks, too. Just thought I'd throw that in real quick.
jammi_gurl 2007-04-06 . chapter 1
yo.. do continue! its not bad at all! really curious to c whre this will go to.. hahah i wonder is it dad slash or son slash? hm hehehe
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