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| flies.like.decay. 2007-04-09 ch 1,   | Hmm... What I read was pretty good. I only got about half way through and it was just SOO long and I'm one of those "65 words per chapter" people and anything longer than that is a blessing, ha ha. So.. Your writing is good and stuff, but... I'm just really not into the long chapters, man. Ha ha. It hurts my brain. I need some coffee... |
| ............ 2007-04-08 ch 1, | I think this needs another review. I mean, it hasn't gotten one for about three days. So yeah. This is my review. |
| When Nudity Ruled The World 2007-04-06 ch 1, | OH MY GOD!! This story SUCKS! **! Who the hell would name their kids Bluebell and Peekaboo?! You freaks!! Leprechauns are supposed to be small, not tall! And Leprechauns are NOT hot! Haha, is that flamey enough? I rounded it up to five. yay. are you on now? |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2007-04-06 ch 1, | Okay, I've got it. Seeing as we didn't actually put where Kian's gold went, we can make it so that *Sonny* stole it, and he leaves it in Rowan's care for safekeeping, only she doesn't know she has it. I'm a genius! Also, we need to allow anon reviews so we can review this ourselves. And so people who don't want to be linked with our story can read and review in secret. By the way, you have to review as well so that we can round it up to FIVE whole reviews. And zero flames, which is disappointing in itself... so is the fact I don't know how to spell disappointing... |
| jammi 2007-04-06 ch 1, | What I find interesting is that this is listed under romance but he finds her smell absolutely repulsive. It will also be interesting to learn about the rules of this world since he's apparently a giant which goes against the norms that we know about leprecauns. Her brother is such an **, oh man, if my brother did what he did I would be arrested for fratricide. You have to cringe but at the same time it's sort of amusing. Poor Rowan, embarrassed by her brother and now a leprecaun is after her for stealing his gold. A leprecaun with a superiority complex and a tendency to steal. I wonder how he's going to explain how he found her to her, unless he comes out and admits he's a leprecaun. Hmm... |
| summers-end 2007-04-06 ch 1, | I love the bipolarity of Rowe and Kian's tough-guy attitude. Should make for an interesting mix. Update soon! summers-end |
| Violent Pornography 2007-04-06 ch 1, | This story is great so far and I already love the characters Really well written. I can't wait for more |