I always hate to get cut on the fingers, it makes work so difficult.

Romance is a bitter sweet dish.

SirScott

You have amazing talent. Excellent job.

Rowan.

that was.. depressing to say the least.

but god. fantastic imagery

"With lovely fantasies/Clinging to my torn up/Tongue of almost lies" almost jumped with joy; love those lines

great job :)

You certainly do have talent.

I love so much of the phrasing/word choice/metaphors/ here I won't go into it all.

It was all spectacular.

I'm faving it.