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| Kevin 2007-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the poem, first dates are like that.(I'd know) really saw the emotion of the moment there. Good job hope to see more stuff from you. |
| Ashelin 2007-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis was really cute and sweet. You could see them both nervously, anxiously sitting there. Great job! Loved the emotions. |
| Andy the Star 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you captured that moment, and still left me wanting to know more! Hope you found love, and keep up the good work! |