| Reviews for Just Can't Take it Anymore |
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a silenced revolution 6/24/07 . chapter 1Your acrostics are always wonderful, but this one is... extra wonderful, I guess. Anyway, it's an amazing favourite. |
Keara 4/26/07 . chapter 1 Wow this has great form and also lovely vocabulary. I applaud your poem for i like it very much. Congrats. |
CrazyTurtles 4/7/07 . chapter 1I really like. It feels ture. That donst make sence, but I will say it anyway. |
Coolforever11Emily from Neo 4/6/07 . chapter 1 I adored this one. It's got extreme emotion, excallent word-choice, and nice use of...everything! I love the "just can't take it anymore" for the begining letters...briliant! No critiques, sorry! |
Ashelin 4/5/07 . chapter 1The ending was the best I think. This was really good. "It's never going to be over, will it?/The pain, the suffering, the hurt?" Great job. |
burning in effigy 4/5/07 . chapter 1holy moly. an acrostic that makes sense! :) the 'e' in take... i think you mean every, not ever the last stanza (anymore) are kind of creepy (the voices, and this poem makes me feel sad love the emotion in this |