Interesting. The last line needs an 's' and a period. Another problem, probably a typo: "as the Prince of Cat stood". Your description of the city is good, though I'd like it to have periods at the end of lines which are also full sentences. The description of the cat himself is also pretty good, realistic in a surreal/T.S.Eliot sort of way. I like "Again the air lifting her voice/Calling for help whilst she slept", and I'd like to read the upcoming story to see what this means. In a couple places you switch tense where you shouldn't: "The lights flickering...As nighttime blanketed the sky" and "the Prince of Cat stood...He shall not follow that voice". This sequence "As a cat he is/The man was fickle" confused me; perhaos adding some punctuation would clarify whether the cat is the man or the man is another subject entirely or whatever it's about. "Hearing the Dreamers sleep" is an intriguing line. So, I'll look for your cat story, and this poem could be very nice if you cleaned it up a bit.

Me likies! And you FINALLY did something that has to do with writing and posting something! Yays!