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| burning in effigy 2007-04-05 ch 1,  | abusereminds me of "i know why the caged bird sings" the poem.. not the book i like how you you the bird to symbolize a person (if that was your intention) only problem i have with this (minor detail) is that i think you should separate you're note from the poem.. use the err.. "horizontal line thing" or have a break there good poem :) |