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| Moni Jane 2008-04-14 ch 1, | This definitely had a depressing feel to it. :( Great none the less, however. I love how it didn't rhyme. Rhyming poems can annoy me. This made much more of an impact since it didn't. So great job. may good writings continue to you. ~Moni Jane |
| sin olvido 2007-05-05 ch 1, | Great poem... sad, but good. |
| burning in effigy 2007-04-05 ch 1, | very sad poem i like how you took the colors of the flag and gave the colors a meaning (unless they were the original meanings... then nice incorporation into a poem) great poem :) |