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Reviews For: Leave the Pieces

KayB
2007-07-01
ch 4,
I reallyenjoyed reading this, although I thought it lacked something. I have no idea what that something is so it's best to ignore that. Anyway, update soon.
Haybay smartie
2007-05-14
ch 4,
hey! doing great, i like how u edited it.
and for thinking of the question i asked u and clearing that up for me. keep reading no matter how few reviews u get cuz it's a great story and deserves to be on fiction press.
:D
~Hayley~
Haybay smartie
2007-05-13
ch 3,
nice, it looks so much more formal online christina. it really is a great story. tell me if you need any more ideas or help.

~Hayley~
R.G. Angel
2007-05-03
ch 2,
I was looking in the forum section and came upon your post so decided to come over here and have a look at your story!

Is there suppose to be a quotation on Mrs. Storms in the first chapter?

Also you want to remember if you put words together like can not and is not, don't forget the '. Can't, isn't...

You've got a really good story going here, and I wish I had found out about it sooner... Count on me to review for you!

Blessings
~Angel

PS I love your profile! The thing about Ramen and bagels is great!
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