This chapter took me longer to get through than I expected, college is kicking my ass. Glad I finally found time to read this chapter though. As always it's a nice diversion from life. I want to pet Jason's head out of sympathy but somehow I don't think he'd be very fond of that. Good chapter, I always find it interesting to read inner Jason monologues. Keep up the good work. I know getting this stuff out here in the open isn't an easy task. It's my job to remind you that all your hard work is loved and appreciated.

-Rei

Poor Jason. How does he function with that shit-storm of craziness inside his head? And I don't know about everyone else, but I really enjoy chapters like this. I love being able to really see inside a character's head, especially one like Jason. And the little snippets of Rori and Jason's first meeting are eye-opening.

Plus, there is an insane amount of improvement from the last edition. I can't believe it's been 5 years and that you were only 15 when you started. I love your style and it's cool to see the differences and how you changed over time.

On a completely random side note, this made me crave the most unusual pairing. The though of Jason and Julian is very tempting. I love seeing the tender moments between those two.

Can't wait for the next installment!

Well I have to say that this is the best chapter so far. I've read it twice and I think it gives a good understanding of why Rori is a ass sometimes and also let Jason be mad. I like how they talk it out and how it ends with Jason not forgiving Rori cus that was the one thing in the first story that I could never get over, how fast everyone moves on. But I think that its going good now. It feels like I'm reading a whole new story and i like it. I think that the first story was good,but I really like this one better because I think the development of the characters are more in depth and it gives the reader a little more background on them. As for how long u take wit the updates, take ur time because if they all come out like this then we can wait a few months to read it lol. once again loved the characters and can't wait for the next one.

I can barely compare this version to the original. I know I've said it many times before but I'll say it again, Your writing has grown so much. Everything this time around feels so much more believable. Thanks again as always and keep up the good work. As hard as I know rewriting this thing must be, you are doing a wonderful job and should continuing on doing so. Till the next update,

Rei

Cool, I like what you did with this chapter, very real *thumbs up to Jace*
"Uke Jason" he is not :D
Nice chapter, once again

I read this story AGES ago, and now I find it again and find out you're rewriting it! I'm just so excited to have found it again. I loved it. I never had the chance to review though, since I didnt have an account back then. But I'm just so excite! Finding this has made my day.

so i read this and cried.. Like real serious tears. I mean I loved the original, but I think this one was better because it didn't seem rushed. And even though I'm not a Julian fan I liked his perspective. I also loved that the people in the house actually acknowledge what is happening to Jason and don't like it. Umm I just really liked this new version so good luck with the next chapter, thanks for the update.

I first read this story a few years ago when I first started getting into fanfiction,etc. And ill tell you the truth, i was deeply confused with the plot, of course i blame my naive more so then your writing skills, but when i found out you where redoing the story I was very excited. I love what you've changed, taken out, and left the same. Your doing awesome, then only thing slightly negative is the long wait between updates but you cant rush genius now can you? lol

Yay! another chappy! well finally.. hehehe

Wow, I really hate Rori right now inspite whatever remorse/pain he might feel for hurting Jason. Jason thought he was just a rag doll after seeing Rori being so gentle with Julian that night and what Rori did just concluded his thoughts ten times over. Makes me wonder how are they are gonna get pass this... jeez now I can't wait for the next update(like that's news)

I also thought that Julian patching up Jason is pretty significant...

Thanks!

Well. I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter, not so much the pain within but still. The wait was worth it

I don't think I like Allan, I mean despite the fact that I don't quite like werewolves anyhow, he seems too loud. Almost gave me a headache reading all those exclamation point sentences :(


err...yeah i was slightly crazy in the last review...oops?
but i was planning on boosting your ego any way! so plus!!
(if i could find a way to make a 'thumbs up' with the keyboard i would have done it just right there)


oh, and, Merry Holidays!

Happy Holidays! Wow sorry for not reviewing that last chapter. I feel bad for that. In any case I like how this chapter was reworked. Allan still is the voice of harsh reason. Last chapter was good as well. I like the way everything pieces together now. It really is an improvement over the original. I bet reworking this is really challenging but the results are well worth the struggling and screaming. Keep up the good work okay?

i love this rewritten version Unwanted Guardian!! You rock!! Big time! Me love you very much!

Though I don't like to see Jason hurt, I love the rape scene... *big sadistic grin* bwahahahahahaha!! More blood! More gore! hehe.. okay, i'll stop before i creep you out...

Seriously though, that rape scene is an improvement... :D

OMG! The rape thing is so much darker than the original one. I was like, biting my nails off!

I wonder what's gonna happen to Jason, though... I don't think he can "play it down" this time. I do think he undereacted in the original story... well... I'm just being my sour and vengeful self.

Thanks!

Wow. I'm so glad I read it now because if I read the chapter when I barely had anytime I would have missed the awesomness of it! (because when I'm tired I tend to get pissy and ignore--in a way--some parts of a story that I am currently reading, heh)
But I have a question. When and who said,
“Did it ever occur to you that maybe he’s just trying to, I dunno, get things on the right track? That, maybe, he’s trying to rein himself in for your sake – to ‘train’ himself, in a manner of speaking, that no means no? Ever think of that, genius?”
I don't remember...

No you dont NEED to stop writing your rants, I just need to learn not to read them ;P
I have always thought you educated me...is that at all weird the way I said that? lol

Ooh I loved the way you ended it, totally believable that Jason died. But he DIDN't because then THAT would suck and I would have to Mapquest your house and burn it down in memory of dear Jacey Pacey. . .
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I'M JUST KIDDING!
but i'm sure you got that


Random: Have I mentioned I just love your writing, because I do! Loved this chapter and all that inhibit it (: :)




PS- I want that shrine! XD

PEACE!

I loved the original of this and I have re-read this stories many times... but this, this was great. I was captivated the whole time, I think i might like this one better and thats hard cus I thought it couldn't get better. Good stuff I liked this re-written chapter the best so far.