Reviews for The Fourth Refrain

Chidori Nadare 2007-07-24 ch 1,	abuseLet's see...For me, it means atonement in a sense. [...A responsive heart within/The repentive slave]. It might also mean tranquility. [Soothing words enter...] Anyways, a very nice spiritual poem. Nice job! Adding this to my faves -C.N
simpleplan13 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseI like this... especially the middle line
Basara 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abuse...I understand this... nice...
Midnight In Eden 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abuseI think a touch of punctuation would really help guide the flow in this haiku. Just a comma after the second and first lines with a period at the end. Or something else? Otherwise, interesting little piece. .:midnight:.