Let's see...For me, it means atonement in a sense. [...A responsive heart within/The repentive slave]. It might also mean tranquility. [Soothing words enter...] Anyways, a very nice spiritual poem. Nice job! Adding this to my faves


-C.N

I like this... especially the middle line

...I understand this...

nice...

I think a touch of punctuation would really help guide the flow in this haiku. Just a comma after the second and first lines with a period at the end. Or something else?

Otherwise, interesting little piece.

.:midnight:.