 Chidori Nadare 2007-09-14 . chapter 1'I never did taste venom so sultry when I hungered like a wolf against your lips,
Eyelashes so pure that danced against my cheeks, even as I took my devlish risks,' and
'I never tasted alcohol so sweet, your skin was something I could dine for as a treat,'...
Wow! That made me stopped and looked.
Hm...Does this mean that her lover is gone forever? But it's categorized as angst not tragedy...I really like this, though.
-C.N |
 soft-spoken 2007-04-06 . chapter 1"I never did taste venom so sultry when I hungered like a wolf against your lips,
Eyelashes so pure that danced against my cheeks, even as I took my devlish risks,"
oh wow, my heart skipped a beat.
this was beautiful.
very nicely done, such imagery and such description. I felt all that you wrote.
great job.
keep it going.
ps this is one of my favourites ;) |