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| Chidori Nadare 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuse'I never did taste venom so sultry when I hungered like a wolf against your lips, Eyelashes so pure that danced against my cheeks, even as I took my devlish risks,' and 'I never tasted alcohol so sweet, your skin was something I could dine for as a treat,'... Wow! That made me stopped and looked. Hm...Does this mean that her lover is gone forever? But it's categorized as angst not tragedy...I really like this, though. -C.N |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseinteresting emding.. beautiful descriptions... I loved the line about the eye lashes |
| soft-spoken 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuse"I never did taste venom so sultry when I hungered like a wolf against your lips, Eyelashes so pure that danced against my cheeks, even as I took my devlish risks," oh wow, my heart skipped a beat. this was beautiful. very nicely done, such imagery and such description. I felt all that you wrote. great job. keep it going. ps this is one of my favourites ;) |